tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7122549.post7215345669532605521..comments2023-11-10T16:19:46.880-05:00Comments on Blogslot: Leaving RoomUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7122549.post-36401827484964646112008-05-06T17:12:00.000-04:002008-05-06T17:12:00.000-04:00I had no trouble with the police headline. I learn...I had no trouble with the police headline. I learned to avoid using helping verbs in headlines, unless leaving them out makes the head unclear.Lynn Klyde-Silversteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478378935154710640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7122549.post-86680772565631752512008-05-02T14:19:00.000-04:002008-05-02T14:19:00.000-04:00See: I told you everybody needs an editor!See: I told you everybody needs an editor!Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01512881095588291721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7122549.post-75519415239716281462008-05-02T13:54:00.000-04:002008-05-02T13:54:00.000-04:00It "makes" me smile!"make" would be a very helping...It "makes" me smile!<BR/><BR/>"make" would be a very helping verb in your sentence.noneemachttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12258392029445056994noreply@blogger.com