Thursday, February 28, 2008

The Illinois Senator and the New York Senator


Barack Obama, Illinois senator? Well, he was, but now he's a U.S. senator! OK, OK, OK -- this is a story about pedantry and the all-sorts-of-different lines that can be drawn in its name, and I'm just telling you where I stand. I try to avoid "Illinois senator" and "New York senator" in references to Obama and Hillary Clinton. There, I said it, though I grant that I would never use "Illinois senator" or "New York senator" alone to refer to a state senator. Call it a nicety, one of those let's-be-absolutely-clear gestures that only a copy editor would make. Of course, the natural alternative -- "senator from Illinois" -- has its own problems if you're a true pedant. Obama isn't from Illinois (but Clinton is). Still, I say OK to the latter idiom but not, except under duress, to the former idiom. Such is the delicate balance a copy editor must strike.

2 Comments:

At 5:40 PM, Blogger Tahoe Editor said...

I think "from New York" can be clearly understood as "sent to the U.S. Senate by voters from New York."

 
At 12:24 AM, Blogger Tahoe Editor said...

"The Illinois senator who could become America's first black president had attended Wright's Chicago church since 1992."

http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2008/04/30/AR2008043003157.html

 

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